- Erotic Poetry
- Passion's Fervor
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This is a poem written in collaboration with my girlfriend, NoOtherName. It was in response to the 'Challenge: Grab A Partner' thread in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. You can visit this thread here, http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=293289&perpage=25&pagenumber=1
If seen correctly the lines written by me will be italicized and those by NoOtherName will not be.
At first sight of her my heart jumps
Left speechless by my muted gasp
A smile from her and my pulse races
My eyes join hers in fervent grasp
One small touch brings me to my knees
Trembling unconstrained
Quivering I reach out to her
My need can't be contained
I press my body close to hers
Our hearts race in anticipation
Chills chasing down my spine
Igniting exhilaration
My lips find hers
We melt together
Passion sparks our flame
In convulsive bursting fervor
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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flyguy69over 19 years agoyou held you images together very well-- you obviously understand each other!
WickedEveover 19 years agoThese challenges are fun, and both of your words fit together nicely. :)
