- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Pause - Giving
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Click herePause - Giving (and vice versa)
Giving it up
for love or hate
passion is created
- COMMENTS
Toast.over 19 years agoin poetry should be accomplished without leaving holes for the reader to fill.
Maria2394over 19 years agowhen extremes of emotion converge, or even when the dissect, in either direction. I also like this minimilism, very enjoyable :)
ps, sorry my comment is so long ;)
minsueover 19 years agoThe words are interesting, but they don't move me. It could easily be my own failing, of course. There are few poems of so few words that do.
(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)
WickedEveover 19 years agowhich of course only took a moment. I do love minimalism. lol I'm actually undecided about this poem. Perhaps it's not sinking in this early in the morning. :)
*no thermometer
