Perfect...even in death.

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No one remembers,
I cannot say why
Only thing I keep thinking
Is that nobody tried

You were mine, only mine
No one knew you like me
I don't know why He couldn't
Just let you be

We shared so much
In our short time together,
And the time that we shared
Has made memories forever

So much I learned,
So much I lost -
Everything turned, toppled
And tossed

Butterfly flutters, then turns
And kicks . . .
Then, that sad day . . .
Was my mind playing tricks?

No cry, no movement,
not even a Breath . . .
As you lay on my tummy -
Perfect even in death

When I think of you now
At the age you would be,
A beautiful "big boy"
Is the child I see

My son you were,
My son you'll always be
And One -
That is us;
You and Me

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sacksackover 18 years ago
a difficult one...

to read and write....thanks for sharing!!

ChagrinedChagrinedover 19 years ago
Ohhhhh

Man, this is something else. Are you trying to get me to cry?!!

BlueEyed5ftAngelBlueEyed5ftAngelover 19 years ago
Very Heart felt

Your poetry is quite beautiful!

Keep writing!

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
No words can express

the depth of your loss. But you have reminded me of the depth of mine as well. Thank you.

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