tagNon-Erotic PoetryPerfect Imperfections

Perfect Imperfections

bytheoncomingstorm©

When I am with you
I am at my best
You are my strength
You are my rest

I am made whole
In your embrace
Your touch heals me
Grief is erased

Your heart is pure
Your love is real
You make me smile
You let me feel

Your eyes draw me in
With the sparkle they hold
Your smile erases my fears
Its warmth a treasure to behold

You are perfection
I love you for you
To me it is that simple
That true

I wish you could see yourself through my eyes
It is a stunning view
You are perfect in every way
I love you

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by Queenelizabeth10/18/13

Very nice

'I wish you could see yourself through my eyes
It is a stunning view'

A Simply beautiful line

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by LesseloovesPeter10/16/13

a rare

connection you have made.

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by Oldbear6310/16/13

Very nice

Sweet. Nice writing, Storm

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