- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Perfect Weather
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Rainy rainy day
drumming static at the top of the house,
tin roofed bedroom where sound
muffles moans and I love you's,
blankets sighs and steady breaths
between the times when we rest
waiting for the boom of thunder
a flash through high dormers
the silence when eye meets eye
thigh moves against thigh
- COMMENTS
tazz317about 10 years agoinside being plugged in and attuned to animalistic behavior is the perfection, TK U MLJ LV NV
Tsothaabout 10 years agoH, your category, title, initial line and poem don't agree with each other. I like it. :-) Caught me by surprise. I also like how you've woven the description of the storm outside and of what is happening inside. Great pacing!
greenmountaineerover 10 years agoAs I read this, I began thinking about that word, onomatopoeia, I always have trouble pronouncing; nice contrast in the consonants between tin roof raindrops and muffled moans. Well crafted, Harry.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoLightning flashes & erotica hits a new high !! 5-ed .
GuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago....the word play, the sound and the silences. Good 'un HH. 5
