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Click herePersistent now in the pounding
and clawing to get out
and aching deep inside
the need is almost too much
Pull the knife out
and let me bleed
Or twist it in deeper, if you want
as long as I get what I need
I am so much larger than life now
that I could swallow you whole
Fill me on the inside
I want to taste your soul...
You show an intimate use of off rhyme, which is a talent in itself and the content is strong and mind blowing. Loved this poem! Good work!!
~ maria
The words, inside, deep, swallow, taste, need etc. give it an erotic tinge, but the need seems much more emotional than physical. Well done.