phantom bonds [the skyrider]

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bluerains
bluerains
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I wear your pleasure like musk
it dresses the hunger of my sea siren
scent in leathery lusty spice

your breath like florid wine
sweet and rare upon the lips
is a primrose in the garden of
my amusement

your body like the raging ocean
liquid and salty in a heated deluge
thrashes my naked core
into submission

your essense the blood
pulsing in tributaries tangled
within my hips
shackle our zenith


the well spring of our release
renews us, holds us
and restores us ,
the angels of bondage

bluerains
bluerains
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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
you have to love a poem that offers:

"sea siren scent in leathery lusty spice"

I've read that part several times.

The entire poem is wonderful but I just love your "sea siren scent in leathery lusty spice."

It was a pleasure just to type that out twice!:)

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Love...

...this, blue. The language is beautifully chosen and handled. Extremely sensuous!

jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
Damn sensuous poem...

fragrance, taste and feel, this one touched them all. Well done.

jim : )

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 20 years ago
interesting title

and some beautiful words to accompany it. I would offer one tiny suggestion..drop the "a" near heated deluge...it picks up the rhythm a tiny bit. I really enjoyed this poem, thank you bluerains :)

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Wow

some great images here and excellent word choices.

" your body like the raging ocean

liquid and salty in a heated deluge

thrashes my naked core

into submission"

That is great

Really well done Blue

: )

Thank you

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