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Click hereI wear your pleasure like musk
it dresses the hunger of my sea siren
scent in leathery lusty spice
your breath like florid wine
sweet and rare upon the lips
is a primrose in the garden of
my amusement
your body like the raging ocean
liquid and salty in a heated deluge
thrashes my naked core
into submission
your essense the blood
pulsing in tributaries tangled
within my hips
shackle our zenith
the well spring of our release
renews us, holds us
and restores us ,
the angels of bondage
"sea siren scent in leathery lusty spice"
I've read that part several times.
The entire poem is wonderful but I just love your "sea siren scent in leathery lusty spice."
It was a pleasure just to type that out twice!:)
...this, blue. The language is beautifully chosen and handled. Extremely sensuous!
fragrance, taste and feel, this one touched them all. Well done.
jim : )
and some beautiful words to accompany it. I would offer one tiny suggestion..drop the "a" near heated deluge...it picks up the rhythm a tiny bit. I really enjoyed this poem, thank you bluerains :)
some great images here and excellent word choices.
" your body like the raging ocean
liquid and salty in a heated deluge
thrashes my naked core
into submission"
That is great
Really well done Blue
: )
Thank you