Pimp Of Pleasure ...

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Pimp of pleasure

I'm a stool rats snitch.
Come hither let'me teach you.
Sing a canary tune
deep 'n low. Squeak
and tweet, make you
tattle on fiendish thoughts
that carry you over the edge.

Betray those hidden secrets
then blab to this pirate
of treasure, what floats
your boat on those eerie
darkened nights. When all
is calm, but the pounding

seizures inside your gut.
Those freakish feelings
that wanna prostitute you out
and beg for more ...

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Cub4ucmeCub4ucmeover 17 years ago
Impressive Write

Hopped on the train and enjoyed the ride.

I like gutsy poetry that doesn't stumble

and ends with a well chosen close at

the right time.

There's a couple of things I might change

but, I'm not going there right now.

I just wanted you to know this worked

for me.

andy

Velvet_PollyVelvet_Pollyover 17 years ago
oh! you do have

some interesting inner rhymes in this one. You could lose the word "seizures" and rework the line breaks to make it more effective. I liked this one a lot-- good work :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
pimp of pleasure

I assume we pimp ourselves out in many ways... such as work <grin and then there is sex <biggergrin' (~_*) a super, erotic read!

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 17 years ago
tattletales...

may prosper. I guess it depends on what you are telling, and to whom.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Anchor's Aweigh...

Well...I'm pretty sure the boat referred to isn't the Good Ship Lolipop. I have to say - I liked this poem. Didn't understand it all - but I liked it!

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