Pin-Up Girl

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Pin-up girl
January to December
With legs to remember

Pin-up girl
Feather fans and boas
They all wanna know ya

Pin-up girl
Night into day
She's ready to play

Pin-up girl
From Bettie to Dita
A modern day lolita

Pin-up girl
36-24-36
Pillow lipped dream

Pin-up girl
Much sweeter than
Double whipped cream

Pin-up girl
With Coca-Cola curves
To quench your thirst

Pin-up girl
From Marilyn to Molly
A modern day dolly

Pin-up girl
Cherry red lips
Devil smile kiss

Pin-up girl
Corsets and stockings
Peek-a-boo style

Pin-up girl
Leather and latex
Stiletto heel kicks

Pin-up girl
From Bettie to Dita
A modern day lolita

Pin-up girl
Angel or devil
She'll never tell 'ya

Pin-up girl
With the wink of an eye
She'll make a grown man cry

Pin-up girl
Twirling tassel pasties
Driving sane men crazy

Pin-up girl
From Marilyn to Molly
A modern day dolly

Pin-up girl
Rock star wife
Living the high life

Pin-up girl
Champagne and caviar
Eating like a movie star

Pin-up girl
Diamonds and furs
What a glamourous world

Pin-up girl
Bettie to Dita
A modern day lolita

Pin-up girl
Vintage to modern
She's cream of the crop

Pin-up girl
From hollywood to France
She'll dance dance dance

Pin-up girl
From limos to hotels
All the world's a stage

Pin-up girl
Marilyn to Molly
A modern day dolly


- by Savannah Skye...

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cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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I would have to agree that it is a bit to long and needs to be pared down somewhat. There are some amazing lines though, such as:

"Pin-up girl

With Coca-Cola curves

To quench your thirst"

sacksackover 18 years ago
maybe a bit too long....

From the 24 stanzas, you might want to pick 12-15 "killer ones" and rewrite the poem accordingly. It might emerge stronger even if you did that!

sacksackover 18 years ago
maybe a bit too long....

From the 24 stanzas, you might want to pick 12-15 "killer ones" and rewrite the poem accordingly. It might emerge stronger even if you did that!

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