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Pink Sunset Lit World

byvrosej10©

eyes on her hands, the pins, the dress dummy,
she hurries unaided; slaved all last night too
still stitching beads, lace; the wedding's tomorrow
people gossip on the street below, a baby cries;
she sighs, checks the darts, the seams, the hemline
a pause to push a dark tress behind her ear
and only on tea breaks, dreams herself a bride.

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