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Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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three steps
one word
four arms
forearms
young pefume
old eyes
while lies
brave smiles

a turn
a jolt
a face
shrinking
fading

ten thousand seconds later
still that gaping hole
dug by three steps
and one word
repeating

over
and
over
 

Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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LinbidoLinbidoabout 20 years ago
Such a sad little picture

*sniff* Who haven't waved someone off at the station? It captured the sense very nicely.

ps. Rybka, what would an "a" add to "pefume"? Ape-fume or Pea-fume? ;)

RybkaRybkaabout 20 years ago
???

"pefume" ??? Are you missing an "R" or an "A"? >?(((><

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