Pleasing a girl, told by a girl.

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Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet,
But not as sweet as you.

But by you I mean your twat,
So spread your thighs, and give me all you got.
Scream my name,
As pleasure mixes with pain,
and i'll never stop.

I may not have a cock,
But I know your sweet spot,
I'll be the first to make you pop.

A lovers' care,
Is something I don't dare,
In making love to you.

I'll rip you open,
filling both holes and,
Whispering your name with a loveing coo.

I'm seconds away,
from making you say,
"I'M CUMMING BOO!"

Your cum slidding down my chin,
And in between the twins,
Oh, I love it, and you know I do!

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MSTarotMSTarotover 11 years ago
It was good.

Lets see what you can do beyond the rhyme. or maybe take it to where the words have a similar sound but don't directly rhyme.

A dark steel lily

in the lost twilight,

a silver orchid

in dawns gentle light

a midnight tullep

and a snow white rose.

At days dying daze.

The flower of the hour,

lost to time's withered

gaze.

And also don't take my advice with out a grain of salt. I'm not a true poet..more of a storyteller than even a writer..

M.S.Tarot

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