- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Pleasure and Pain ~ for Whom?
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Click herePleasure and Pain ~ for Whom?
Sweet and firm,
she ties spiritual and physical;
with garb to suit
the roles they aspire.
Haughty facade
masks depths never fathomed;
of caring and passion
fierily unleashed.
Demands for submissions undreamt,
a nightmare not, to souls of strength;
reality's incongruity to the image ~ unseen,
with eyes' questing pleas little seen.
In silence she speaks volumes
of steel and leather;
of ties that bind;
love, care, trust,
and fulfillment without measure.
The pain of triumph, the joy of submission;
all that's possible, She shows
as two become one, and souls are branded
with roles deeply cherished.
And as breathing resumes, She inspires.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
- COMMENTS
SmoochingSamanthaabout 17 years agoLoved it, you have true talent, one to aspire to. Thank you for sharing
XyJonahover 17 years agoYou were the first to leave a comment on my first submission. Tonight, I finally found time to read and contemplate your poetry.
To think that you found something in my work that you thought worthy of praise amazes me.
Thank you; I'm a fan.
xxxkaliaxxxover 17 years agoHello there,
You've been leaving some comments on my poetry so it was only fair that I check out your own work. I've been sitting here reading through a bunch of your poems and I'm quite impressed - you have a beautiful talent. I had to come back to this poem I enjoyed it so much.
--Kalia--
darkitudeover 17 years agoForgive the use of your line. It ensnared me where I live. Hats off. <blink> I was trained not to answer the door for solicitors. Do that some more and "we" may offer you some words to whet shared thirsts.
Wanton Vixxxenabout 18 years agoReading your words penned within this poem and the depth of feelings evoked was as if you had a virtual reality tour of My chambers during a scening. For someone who is admittedly foreign personally with the craft, you have drawn, with remarkable emotional clarity , from all five senses and have left this Domme shaking her non-blonde {laughin'} head in very impressed amazement!
As for the comments made concerning overuse of semi colons~ it is purely a matter of choice over commas~ nothing serious; nothing deadly {note the Queen of Semi Colons reigning over Her Land of Punctuation here}. Neither punctuation used would have marred the content of this poem, believe Me.{smile}
This was indeed a pleasure~ with NO pain~ to read!
Vixxx
