- Non-Erotic Poetry
- PLUR Psalms 03
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Melodic narcotic
zoo of a warehouse
school disco manque
fun saturday night
Cigarettes and silver
sneakers the future
coordinates cyborgs
inhabited when
Elbows and clavicles
litter glitter
sweat hurricane
not apropos
Synth rubber maiden
phat pants and camis
smiles of a stranger
I love you so well
New morning breaking
snag summer night
nothing remiss
your breath in my hair
Dust speckled window
sleep glitter lashes
monday rude knocking
who am I again
- COMMENTS
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago....feel comfortable with your formatting - the jerky, disjointed read it creates.
Perhaps it is deliberate but, to me, it's a pity because you throw away some lovely lines that get lost in the rough and tumble of the verses.
Try a new way of presentation, just as an experiment. I don't want you to lose your specific characteristics, just stretch a bit.
Tess
