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DawnJ
DawnJ
326 Followers

Some poems come in thunderclouds,
like grumbling, grouchy men
that roar and thud and thrash about
like lions in their den.

Some poems come on quiet feet,
like children sneaking in
to beg forgiveness for their play,
because they raised a din.

Some poems come on fairy wings,
like butterflies in flight
dance up and down the pretty blooms
that make the garden bright.

Some poems come on wisps of air,
like babies' sleepy sighs
that puff out rosy lips and cheeks,
breaths of God in disguise.

© 2013

DawnJ
DawnJ
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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Beyoootifully

Apt !!!

AngelineAngelineabout 11 years ago
Delightful

I'm not usually a fan of the ABAB end-rhyme-type poems, but you make this work well because the flow is so good and your word choices and imagery fit together so well. Thank you for the read. :-)

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Love this -

And it gets better all the time :)

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Top marks

Loved the metaphors and rhyme pattern