tagNon-Erotic PoetryPorcelain Altar: redux

Porcelain Altar: redux

byHarryHill©

start:

load; x

x=x+1

REM ....DON'T FORGET TO FLUSH.....

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Porcelain Altar: redu "x"

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The Anon for the most part are kind.

The Invisible are fickle but fair,

but for the most part I find

the most critical Mind

is the one that sits in this chair.

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save; x

REM .....PUT BOTH LIDS DOWN........

save; redu(x)

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by demure10110/05/12
by twelveoone10/04/12

anon, anon

anon no mous
come on out
an show your puss

is that why you put the lid down, harry?
ok i had fun, 5

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by tazz31710/04/12

THE PORCELAIN GOD HIMSELF

beckons all that falter from the demom spirits, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by HarryHill10/04/12

Missed the joke

Chipbutty you are so sly!

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by HarryHill10/04/12

Edit x+1

Saw flaws as soon as it dropped
this would have worked to avoid repetion

but actually I find

the most critical Mind

often sits in this chair.
...
Not in a crappy mood, explained concept to Desejomore...

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