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positive thinking

bybutters©

in a dark and burning world
where even ice catches fire
where skies peel
and the soil is sour
where howlback oscillates
cinder cone to horizon
a shabby soul
may yet get clean

at least
that's what i tell myself

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by Tsotha01/30/14

What last lines? :(

This poem reminds me of something I once heard: "light enters unclean places and comes away uncorrupted".

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