Postcard #4 from a blue planet

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darkmaas
darkmaas
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In Pejeng
east of Ubud
they have a drum
of ancient bronze
so huge
it’s called “the Moon”.

Older than Christ
it also
fell from heaven.

When it is struck
the very earth
vibrates in sympathy
a sound
so primitive
ancient
primal.

Before Adam
before the Word
there must have been
the sound the Moon makes.

It throbs
fills every orifice
every pore
embracing soul
you resonate
like some hollow shell
your blood
collects
in loins
half swollen.

As a way of greeting
God
it somehow seems
more civilized
than hanging men
on crosses.

darkmaas
darkmaas
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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Wow...

a look far beyond, so Zen...

"Before Adam

before the Word

there must have been

the sound the Moon makes."

timeless!

jim : )

smithpetersmithpeterabout 20 years ago
bravo and grace

beautiful and full of wonder.

a place I now have visited for too few moments

in the body of your words,

Thank you,

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Perfect and Perfectly Timely

You never disappoint. This is so well said and absolutely the right statement for now. Such a beautiful mind you have, or is it the soul? :)

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