- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Prehistoric Premonition
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feast on this feeling. taste
brunt truth of blood-tied lies.
death comparable to the endless
counting
of days turned disastrous, nights
knifed through. niggling down deep
from burrowing passages inside
vericosed veins engorged
from convulsing seizures leftover
pain. trust no longer
an option. preparing the
vault. locked casket, cascading down
profoundly pitted from prehistoric
premonitions, of one who used to be
... me ~
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 18 years agouse of words and you tied it together well...luv the alliteration...smiles...blue
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agoa perfect pen of poetry from the heart! I always enjoy the visions you paint with words. (~_*)
Anonymousabout 18 years agomuch like the person in it. From primal to present day Nice word selection. Maybe a bit too much alliteration towards the end, detracting from the content. Overall an interesting read.
