Promises

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Remec
Remec
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Sacred oaths and vows I swore
gave way to time and an unanswered heart.
You'll always be the love I adore...
sacred oaths and vows I swore;
Healthy or sick, rich or poor;
I thought only death would keep us apart.
Sacred oaths and vows I swore
gave way to time and an unanswered heart.

Remec
Remec
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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*sigh*

Good work, Remec!

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 19 years ago
This was truly sacred...

as the poignant prose was delivered in such beautiful form! Vixxx, the Village Idiot of poetry, knows nothing about "triolets" as Tess mentions concerning this poem, but I'm certainly willing to learn as this was such an exceptional piece dramatically enhanced by it. Boy, have I got a lot to learn! Another exquisite work from you, Remec. Thank you!

Vixxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A Triolet!

Nicely formed and delivered. Thank you, form poems are too few and far between - I always enjoy them.

Tess