Pulse

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE BEAT AN THROB

to the roar of the engine. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Superbly done juxtaposition of the metaphorical and the literal shown with this illustrated piece as passion and feeling are replaced by the mechanical.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Strong art, moody

At first, I'd think the text was too small, but with the art, the words are giant. Tight and big impact, just the way I like illustrated poems. Thanks.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 17 years ago
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I clicked this open and had to lean back away from the screen for a moment, then get a better look. Great image. Perfect for the words you added.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

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