- Erotic Poetry
- quake
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Click heretremors ripple across
my landscape of skin
not movie pretty, this
the quaking and scratches
we hold tight to the ride
stopping amidst smiling
smoke curls and embers
a spill of liquid simmer
waiting to combust again
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agoI love the phrasing here, with some moving (perhaps quaking) imagery. And the ripples on the landscape of your skin was fantastic. Well done...
jim : )
Tathagataabout 20 years agoof liquid simmer"
great phrase
: )
always something to be found in your work thats new
thank you
YDDabout 20 years agoAn interesting short read, but the landscape = skin metaphor has been completely bulldozed and exfoliated.
