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Click hereI can see the rain
Bouncing off cement
Tiny little bombs
Exploding as they strike
I can hear the rain
Staccato quick drum beat
Hissing through the air
Sizzling on hot tar
I can smell the rain
Pungent like a field
Rich with its mixed tones
Of earth and sky and sea
I can taste the rain
Fresh like new made snow
Sizzling wet delight
Upon my out stretched tongue
I can feel the rain
Trickling down my back
Making small wet lines
Across uneven skin
This is your best of the day.
You incorporate several fresh and strong word images in this poem. Keep doing it!