Rain

bydemure101©

There's too much rain these days. At break of dawn
the window's zebra'd over, and I wake
with a numb sense of too much cloud ahead,

the dread of doubt. And when I leave the house
rain floods the morning. On the shining roads
the sky lies belly-up, suffused with leaves,

and from the puddles water has a go
at passing trousers, hurrying inside -
November morning, dull and wet and wide.

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by Ashesh908/28/13

hv to 'gree with 1201 :

"On the shining roads
the sky lies belly-up, suffused with leaves "
is an excellent piece of Poetry !!! 5-ed

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by twelveoone08/28/13

Oh

killer lines (good killer) here
On the shining roads
the sky lies belly-up, suffused with leaves,
nice!!!
dull and wet and wide.
5ed

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