Rain Dance

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I bid the rain
to tumble softly
into your skye
with color
and
dreaming interlude

Catch a kiss
upon a drop
as the moment
takes your breath,
Shall I make
you a rainbow
with all
the colors dancing
and I singing
in your song ?

For I chanced upon
a wishing well
and the skye
fell,
..O P E N..

As I bid the rain
to tumble softly,
Least not
a tender moment
that you and I
could share
this dance
 bare,
 
feet naked,
In puddles.

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Yes...

...won't you please make me a rainbow while the mud oozes between my naked toes.

lol,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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good imagery, i liked the feet in the puddles.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ahh the rain

can paint such lovely pictures in the mind ...as does this one ...my favorite subject ..you have used your brush well...thanks dear...bluerains

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 18 years ago
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