Rain / Pain

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SHE WRITES AGAIN ..

Rain

Cold, quiet rain gently falling
Yet the dampness we don't feel;
For our bodies are absorbed in each other
Hot as the heat from hell.

You lead me slowly into the woods
Place a quilt on the ground;
The noise of nature is all around us
Yet the beating of our hearts is the only sound.

Your kiss is gentle, yet demanding
My body arches to feel
The touch of your hand, the feel of you
Without resistance to you, I yield.

You taste the essence of my body
You bring more pleasure than I've ever known
I give myself to you completely
The quietness is disturbed by our groans.

You rise above me with a sudden urgency
Our needs are great, we both have found;
Our hearts pounding with anticipation
We become one, lying there on the ground.

Rain has never been more beautiful
As we lie together in each other's embrace;
The taste of you, the feel of nature
A beautiful moment - in my memory forever encased.


HE RESPONDS .. to Rain .. with .....

Pain

Cold, is earthen dungeon floor
to bare feet as they tread
along a darkened path to destiny
excitement mixed with dread.

You are lead blindfolded to a place
that no one yet has seen.
You hear silence ever deafening
muting cries wherefore have been.

This is not the normal comfort zone
for which you often lust
you sense fear beyond imagining
yet submit to One you trust
to be your guide to something different
than your experience comprehends.
A place where pain produces pleasure
that is .. IF it ever ends.

You are stripped of all your garments
and your modesty is vexed.
Yet the discomfort that you feel
is minor, given what comes next.

You are bound with leather lashings
to an upright wooden rack
both support and rough discomfort
to the bareness of your back.

You begin to have misgivings
and you plead with Him to wait.
His firm grip around your neck conveys
to you .. it's much too late.

Your outcries reduced to whimpers
nostrils flaring .. taking in
scents of spices mixed with flora
make your mind begin to spin.
A single flame licks up above you
drop by drop it doth begin.
Gasping sharply with each trickle
molten heat attacks your skin.

The mind has trouble with discernment
nerves cry out from sudden chill
the cold of stainless metal clamps
biting your flesh against your will.

Then His hand so often comforting
you know His gentle touch
now inflicting harsh confusion
Lose the fight. It IS too much.

In your blindness, you seek desperately
for the safety of some place
to escape to as a haven
losing sense of time and space
you're transported in submission
to surreal dimensions far.
All the worries of your normal
not allowed where you now are.

You are floating out of body
all the world has gone away
You've discovered a new realm
tho you'll not be allowed to stay.
For an eternity or two
within the place you've come to be
You have escaped the pain of every day
from life's bonds, you've been set free.

Then slowly down, you start to spiral
back to where you were before.
Reach to grasp without success
your dreamscape is to be no more.

And yet now as you start to waken
your surroundings taking form
raindrops soft against your cheek
you lay there with His body warm
against your own. His arms around you
on the quilt just as before
with the woodlands now in vision.
And you wonder .. was there more?
Where did I go? Was it a dream?
Or did I never leave this place?
The answer only slightly hinted
by the smile upon His face.

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