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- Raindrops in Spring
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Raindrops in Spring©
By:
LuciousBi-Writes4U
Raindrops in spring
Are lazy little things
Dripping and dropping
It seems never stopping
Splashing and sploshing
With a ping-a-ling-ding
Wetting down everything
Blurring the windows so we can't see anything
Stopping for nothing
Coming down with a sting
Showing us spring
Is in full fling
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agotouch..I love the soft rain and I could almost see the raindrops falling as I read your poem.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agotouch..I love the soft rain and I could almost see the raindrops falling as I read your poem.
Bill Dadaalmost 19 years agoSuperfabulapulous, great word, the kind that bounces out of one's mouth like dribbled basketball. Nice work Lucious.
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agoI loved this poems flow and tempo (that's not a car)
This poems structure is sound and the almost melody like read is excellent, a pearl of a poem.
