- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Rambling...
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"Rambling..."
In the long silence
even a mirror can be close
says too much for most
and not enough for the few...
so...
There ARE times
and then
there are TIMES
when I look
at everything
and nothing
and see
what wasn't meant for sight.
So much of each of us
is
purposefully hidden
because we NEED to feel
there is something ours alone...
and yet
we dream
of sharing
ourselves
fully
and being understood
without judgement
or comment...
accepted as the person we are
not the one others perceive.
I like coffee
the scent strong and clear
the heat - reassuring
the taste - cleansing
and the way it pauses time -
inside.
Chris Twyford
Ancient117331
03/25/2005
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44about 19 years agothat when i read it this morning, i'd be back to it again. all in all a great read. if a reader comes back to it, it has left an impression. but these few lines really pack a punch for me:
So much of each of us
is
purposefully hidden
because we NEED to feel
there is something ours alone...
Syndra Lynnabout 19 years agoWell written words translate feelings to which I relate. What more could one want from Sunday morning poetry. Good job.
~Syn
Bridget69about 19 years agoyet it still brings up many important issues to contemplate. I especially liked this part,
"we dream
of sharing
ourselves
fully
and being understood
without judgement
or comment...
accepted as the person we are
not the one others perceive."
Very true and very well said.
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoI found some clever lines in this poem,
a very nice read and an excellent poem
