Raven's Song

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bluerains
bluerains
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Encrusted with dried tears,
tarnished as a red shoe diary;
love remains a reliquary song
sealed within a solitary universe,
its lotus,
unopened.

There at the end of mockingbird minds,
beyond moral frailty
of feeling happy or blue,
sighs me and you,
one vesper away
from Venus.

bluerains
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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Illusionary ~

So much here Blue. I love the imagery

and the feelings that slowly melt through.

Just dreamy and sweet !!

Again ... imagery

outstanding !!

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
very tight....

and i seem to cling to the lotus unopened. it just feels so powerful to me. nicely done.....don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
you write.....

dreams, pure and simple. sandspike

AngelineAngelineabout 18 years ago
Beautiful!

I love when poems are compact yet say a lot as this one does. Thank you for a lovely read. :)

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 18 years ago
ahh...

how i love to read and learn from your poetry!

great inspiration for us newbies!! :)

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