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The darkness fell upon
my eyes,
As all I felt were dripping
thighs.
The musky air filled up my lungs,
As I stretched my neck, and pushed
out my tongue.
My warm wet tongue I did
release,
Inside her pussy, across her crease.
Inside my ears I heard a sound,
As she stretched out, across
the ground.
Her body moved with feelings Red,
Her pussy gushed and then she
said.
She could not speak, there
was no sound,
Except for moaning and scratching
ground.
She pushed back hard,
one last time,
As her mouth screamed
and she came on mine.

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MajjicmanMajjicmanabout 13 years agoAuthor
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Thanks for the comment.

the piece was not meant to be redundant or to imitate or be specific to any type of genre of writing.

it is simply an expression of an experience.

and it doesn't matter if one speaks or writes in a certain way.

its just poetry

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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It's all very well writing in rhymes but pushing lines in that sound forced just to make that rhyme doesn't work i.e 'My warm wet tongue I did

release' nobody actually talks like that.

Your meter is out on quite a few lines and that tends to trip up the reader i.e 'As I stretched my neck, and pushed

out my tongue.'

It's all very clichéd and has been said many times before

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