Red Morning

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demure101
demure101
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Red, red morning indicating rain -
time on my hands is unproductive. All
this sanguin sunrise like a whiplash cuts
right across initial drowsy sense
of slow contentment. There will be no chance
to reach the fells; red morning ends in mist
descending on the crags and from the sea
there will be chilly warnings as the view
gets drowned completely, ghosts of clouds
that drift on lower with the dawn's demise -
dead swordsmen risen from the rocky shore
to blot all daylight from the mountain skies.

demure101
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DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Blood red

I can't imagine such a morning as you've drawn here boding well for anyone!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
A very Good Morning

Ms. Red Morning ! 5- ed !

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE MORNING RED SKY

is always a dire warning. TK U MLJ LV NV