- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Rehearsal
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Click hereREHEARSAL
this recital is the practice
of the unshaken finger
that i point at you
with so much confidence.
it is like the penetrating eye
of the sun - to sieze your mind
and put it in a position
to suddenly uplift your spirits.
even if i were
to tap you in the chest,
it is not to alienate.
let me convert you -
hostile walls have no harmony.
this isn't gospel,
but it sure has power.
walk with me -
the god of dreams
have no place for losers.
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI like !!! I found it a bit of confusing,
then it pulls together and
.... the light shines.
I love the metaphorical echoes here.
Nice write DC~
Anonymousover 18 years ago...I'm uncomfortable with the last two lines.
"the god of dreams
have no place for losers."
I want to add an "S" to "god" or change "have" to "has".
Good one dcp.
Tess
twelveooneover 18 years agoI would think about changing this:
it is like the penetrating eye
of the sun
but that's just me
Anonymousover 18 years agowork in dark molding yet, a light shines though the stage door...I liked it...blue
