- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Release of John D
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john d walked out of prison
today
eighteen months in the slam
for smoking weed
and doing coke
john d walked out of prison
today
with his right hand as his lover
no place to go
except away from the memories
of the first night
and the gangbang shower
the stink of sweat
and grubby hands searching him
first the guards
then the lifers
john d walked out of prison
today
a free man with no money
dressed smartly in prison blues
a blue webbed belt
stained workshirt
blue dungarees and state skates
plastic bag slung over his shoulder
thumb out traveling
hitching a ride
to nowhere in particular
dressed in blues
heading nowhere
to no one
nothing
john d walked out of prison
today
rehabilitated man
future bright
flipping the bird to the past
chasing someone else's dream
hoping to survive
knowing he will
'cause he steals
john d walked out of prison
today
M.S.Leavitt
"Jd4george"
- COMMENTS
sandspikeover 19 years agowill set John free and then put his ass in jail again.
I like this my favorite of the three you posted. It might
be because it was the shortest or the most true.
Tathagataover 19 years agotoo controlled for me...but Tara is probably right.
: )
I like the style...and the bleakness..I just wanted a little more detail which probably would have spoiled it.
Great work as always
Anonymousover 19 years agoThis is a well balanced poem, with emotion and attitude to drive it home. Very well done, jd.
Liarover 19 years agovery netaly on this page. A good portrait with exactly the right tome.
