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Click hereLast night
the full moon
white light
upon your skin
choir sings
that holy tune
angel's wings
a sweet sin
kneel before
your heavenly gates
worship more
speak in tongues
garden tease
the serpent aches
fingers please
the time comes
staff's thrust
your tiny sigh
heaving bust
eyes shine bright
final release
together we fly
eternity's peace
all last night
use of words, really isn't 100, but I rounded up
no real faults, phrases could be a little better
better people than me liked it,
but I'm not a woman
so you know your audience - points for that
...voice you are searching for in your poetry is beginning to make itself be heard more and more, a voice that says, "it's me...this is what I have to say, and I know how to say it......listen!" . Good for you, lostandfounder!