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Last night
the full moon

white light
upon your skin

choir sings
that holy tune

angel's wings
a sweet sin

kneel before
your heavenly gates

worship more
speak in tongues

garden tease
the serpent aches

fingers please
the time comes

staff's thrust
your tiny sigh

heaving bust
eyes shine bright

final release
together we fly

eternity's peace
all last night

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
Nice and clean

use of words, really isn't 100, but I rounded up

no real faults, phrases could be a little better

better people than me liked it,

but I'm not a woman

so you know your audience - points for that

quietpolyquietpolyalmost 20 years ago
lovely

Pure thoughts.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Worship

me beneath the moon. Nice poem!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
That...

...voice you are searching for in your poetry is beginning to make itself be heard more and more, a voice that says, "it's me...this is what I have to say, and I know how to say it......listen!" . Good for you, lostandfounder!

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