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Click hereThe rain,
Tap
Tap
Tap
Against my window glass.
Memories scattered on dusty shelves.
This isn't what I
Imagined.
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Tathagataalmost 19 years agoIf you did this
with a few better word choices it could be a great little poem.
" tap tap tap" is over used, and the " dusty shelf" is too.
But the whole idea of the poem and the length can make it a very powerful piece.
Play around with it a little.
