- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Review 2
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LEMONIA (F)LEAP EDELTRAUD => UNHOLY ECHO DA LONTANO
AVRA
30/8/2013
WHAT'S TO BE DONE WITH AN OLD FUCK 2
(REVIEW 2)
If you pardon my vulgarity,
And the malice you could trace,
You'll admit that I have clarity,
When I'm stating my case.
My review now I would like to draw,
To its logical conclusion,
If I failed the face of truth to show,
Maybe life is an illusion.
Dialectical materialism,
Was, I think, about a fuck,
Like 50ies Total Serialism,
It has met its cul-de-sac.
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Linking URLs,
To my every thought,
I can still hear bells,
"Girl, forget me not".
Managing my page,
Publishing my verse,
Calculate my rage,
And my every curse.
It's a kind of pride,
I can reinstate,
Let us have a ride,
Before it's too late.
It's a kind of pride,
Fixed into my head,
Non the less I tried,
To forgive instead.
Now my conclusion,
For a "WEEK FROM HELL",
Still is in confusion,
There's no URL.
But if it was all just about a fuck,
I think, I would enjoy a good one,
Maybe the only way to get you back,
Or, failing that, at least to get some sun.
- COMMENTS
HoneyAdoredalmost 10 years agoOut of the 20+ poems I have read today, this is the one that stood out for me, I liked it very much :-)
twelveoonealmost 10 years agoreprising "link" here
For a "WEEK FROM HELL",
Still is in confusion,
There's no URL.
this is good, wish I would have had made that "connection"
