rhubarb pie for breakfast

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cavu182
cavu182
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eating rhubarb pie for breakfast
reading Gary Snyder poetry
snow falling outside,
I twist my neck side to side
trying to work out the kink
from sleeping without you …

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lindianalindianaabout 19 years ago
mmmmmmm

rhubarb pie...mmmmm

steve portersteve porterabout 19 years ago
this is the beginning

of a good poem.

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepabout 19 years ago
Your Poem

Is mentioned in the New Poetry Reviews, in the Poetry Discussion Forum! Yay!

~D.A.

TathagataTathagataabout 19 years ago
Nice

slice of life.

almost haiku like and it's paints a big picture with so few words.

Well done

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