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bluerains
bluerains
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3 feet of snow
digressed long ago
what clashed with the sun
double day undone
more and more
at once I've become
scrap á la mode
joyrode

bluerains
bluerains
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

Not a wasted word here, you've become so consise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nicely Done

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Recommendations in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. If this was done for the poetry survivor contest, you may want to put the trigger and form after the poems.

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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I never quite get your stuff, but that only adds to the appeal. I enjoy a mystery. I await your next work.

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