- Erotic Poetry
- Ripening
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ripe for the picking
juicy, succulent
maturing slowly
on the verge of
blossoming
waiting for the moment
fertile ground
a touch of light
a drink of ambrosia
flourishing
hands reaching
sustaining the delicate fruit
a notch of firmness
jolting the freshness
yielding
recognizing the offering
mouth watering
senses heightened by
the relinquishment
and refreshment
devouring the nectar
slurping, quenching
gorging
reciprocal delights
sated from the flavor
- COMMENTS
lostandfounderover 19 years agoand sexual. You used a often used theme and wrote a very good poem without being cliche. A hard thing to do. Nice work!
perksalmost 20 years agoMy comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.
