Rocky Around the Christmas Tree

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oneiria
oneiria
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A glass bulb,
holds the image

of the gathered family
in its red hyperbolic space,

will shatter
at the slightest touch.


oneiria
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HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Sneaky

I wonder why the 'A' was not used for the top. Like the (hidden?) comment.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE RESULT IS A GIVEN

but will the image remain, TK U MLJ LV NV

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
I feel like putting a STAR on the top of that tree...

Here's what I like: the pun on "Rocking around the Christmas Tree" (though I do not like that I now have that stuck in my head). The layout of the poem to LOOK like a tree, sans topping ornament. The way you have captured a family inside a shiny bulb, and questioned its fragility at the same time. Well done.

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