Rouse Afterchurch

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WickedEve
WickedEve
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Rouse Afterchurch speaks
of railway sleepers — wood cross ties,
instead of stone sleepers.

He tries to explain odor
that smells
the way licorice looks.

"Resins.
Creosote bush.
Crude coke oven tar."

I find his explanation
poetic,
as I hold my breath
past the lumber yard.

copyright d. dixon
08-20-2008

WickedEve
WickedEve
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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 15 years ago
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How do you do that?! Words that bring to mind the exact smell! I am so envious well done!

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 15 years ago
excellent

visuals, and the other senses represented accurately. I enjoyed reading you tonight as your form is perpetually intriguing and never disappoints. :)

NJ