Salem Blues

byTrixareforkids©

Witch words should I use
To concoct a potion
Potent enough to de-con cock 't
Your wandering ways
Shall I snip your snail
That leaves a puppy dog trail
Of slime everywhere but here
Where your pipe never smokes
And I'm left to choke
On your crocodile tears
That you say are my fears
Over nothing more
Than sighs and leers
Though I know you for a liar,
Dear
I see it in our bed
Right here
The hair so long and red
Though mine's not been
For many a year
So now you'll drink my poison
Yes, drink it down
While I shall wear
This midnight gown
And spread my potion (#9)
All over town
If a lesson's to be learned
It's beware a witch
That has been burned
For in us brews
The will to turn
From gentle pussy
To clawing beast
Who'll take great pleasure
In the coming feast
For all but you,
Whom I've laid no plate
But rather
Would eviscerate

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by steelkat2906/24/14

Brilliant

I absolutely love this! The condensed one in the comments does read easier but that doesn't mean your original one isn't awesome! Love the puns, veiled treats and overall air of revenge. Seriously, wellmore...

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by Oldbear6306/24/14

Scary anger, Trix

If a lesson's
To be learned
It's beware the
Witch that has
Been burned
I really liked the short lines, the building anger, the planned revenge. He will regret this.

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by twelveoone06/24/14

5ed

and a contrarian take, while it is difficult to read, there is nothing easy about this, is it?
The short lines fairly seethe to me, and they fragment the nursery rimes.
yes reconsider, but read it bothmore...

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by Trixareforkids06/23/14

This is a run off of

The 'what boys are made of' nursery rhyme. Look the whole thing up.

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by todski2806/23/14

i know the piece

You are thinking about cleardaynow it wasn't that one she had a second piece that has a similar feel to this one, that it just didn't quite gel with the write. It was an older piece. I might pop throughmore...

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