Samovar

bydarkmaas©

Tea with my aunt
the scent of musty lavender
and remembrances of a dashing Cossack.

She sees my smile
distorted in reflection
from the polished samovar
floating splendid
on a hard sea of mahogany.

"Your grin is out of place.
You find it hard to imagine
me a lusty widow.
There was a time young man,
I might have played you like a cello."


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by UnderYourSpell07/22/13

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Oh I say :) naughty Aunty midst the cucumber sandwiches and Earl Grey tea :)

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by Anonymous07/21/13

It is a swell poem

Leave the shit alone! Only a twit has the need to rewrite other peoples poems.

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by Angeline07/20/13

Wow

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by twelveoone07/20/13

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is great, we'll allow for the Aunt actually saying that, however the end line comes off to me not as an unhammered nail, but one that has actually fallen out of the hole.
Cossack> samovar (good)
Cossack.>more...

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