Sarah's Surprise

Poem Info
171 words
4.67
2.5k
0
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

I hold onto slippery ankles
while Sarah stretches as far as possible
giggling so much I am afraid she will squirm from my grasp
a shaky worm of a girl coiling out to grasp a frog
I know she will not catch, yet I still encourage
as she emerges back on the boat, a wiggle of giggles
making me promise to close my eyes
her bathing-suit-clad-skinny-girl-self trembling with excitement
I laugh and oblige, falling back onto the seat
in a second she is upon me
her trembling fingers brushing back my hair
I can hear her excitement as she sucks in tight cheeks
my little fish, trying to hold back the squirmy worm of a girl
she is tucking something soft behind my ear
then her little body becomes a flurry of excitement
leaping around on the small pontoon
arms and legs flailing, smiling from ear to ear
she hollers out, “beautiful, beautiful,” as I feel the lily
that was supposed to be a frog
tucked snugly behind my ear

Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
4 Comments
RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Very Sweet ~!!

What a wonderfullll story.

I can *see* it all.

I too write a lil like this at times.

Oft times, we just gotta

say what we think ... feel.

Just loved this touching, heartfelt story

of you and your * beauty * ~

Lotz more Please~

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
superb...

and has that touch of the narrative prose and soaks in me with vivid imagery. could it be almost like saying, "a frog in the throat in no more?" just a hunch. wonderful stuff......don

TathagataTathagataover 18 years ago
beautiful

wonderfully phrased, and the ending was perfect.

Made me smile.

Thank you

ReltneReltneover 18 years ago
?

I am not sure if you write poetry, or descriptive and emotive vignettes, but whatever they are very good!

Thank you for a good read.

Share this Poem