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Scandalous mom

bymomandme©

So once there was a house there was there was a house.

And in that house there lived a family sick – ko

And that mother was a good right old nympho.

When her husband dropped off to sleep,
She slipped out to take a scandalous peak
At the nubile young form of her delicious son
And thought "Let's have a little fun :D ".

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by Anonymous

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by momandme12/31/13

Thanks for the food for thought

@pelegrino: The son just turned eighteen.
@twelveoone: I agree that this poem is far from perfect. I'll think about the rhyme suggestion. The first line will have to do without the comma, in order to reflectmore...

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by pelegrino12/30/13

Give us some more of this story please. What's the age of the son?

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by Remec12/29/13

I think you have a good concept and start, but it's obviously unfinished and in need of some editing to make better sense of things and to allow a better incorporation of the rhymes and near-rhymes beingmore...

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by twelveoone12/29/13

should read

fun-o, not son-ho, sorry for the mistake, it's hard to think straight after seeing an anon comment, he is just that funny.

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by twelveoone12/29/13

De-pravo!!

would have been better with a variant rhyme son/fun eh? son-ho/ sick-ko/ nympho
first line begs a comma, or better wording, bwtf the resident genius approves -
lord almighty don't leave a name
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