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Click hereIn the day
I tried to engineer a poem,
a calculated construction
that would move
with geometric certainty;
but at three am
I find myself
alone
writing,
seeking an island
where there is no beaten path.
I drift, without anchor or rudder,
falling into an hypnotic reverie
where time is no longer rational.
I relive the glorious splendor of morning
when the priceless sun rose naked in azure skies,
long before the idea of the coming Flood
washed away heroic visions of Achilles
and compelled me
to collect picture postcards of the Golden Calf;
a time when play was play without any rules,
a rain puddle an ocean alive with possibilities,
a broken stick a sword that could defeat evil armies;
an awakening where emotion and perception reigned
while logic and principle were seedlings struggling
in a thriving garden of innocence.
I dream, and as the poet becomes what he paints,
regaining the mystic power of transformation,
I observe fresh words flowing out
in primitive handwriting I do not recognize.
I greet the magic dragon, roaring with raucous delight
as he leaves his cave by the Arctic sea
where green nights and glittering ice
illuminate phosphorescent reflections
of queens and zebras dancing in the snow at twilight
celebrating the rebirth of beauty and imagination.
Good stuff Koba. It's a great idea, well executed. Despite the previous comments, there are no perfect writers and believing you are such will inhibit your growth.
what happened to my comment--arghhhh! This is a good romp of a muses playing, drifting in and out of the process of creation.
There are only two perfect writers around here.
Me, and you, and we are all watching you...lol.. But then I type about 30 WPM without error and at 36 WPM it becomes 100% error!
I enjoyed this, it gave me a vision of someone standing on a stage in a dark night club reciting it. Not sure if that was the intent but if it was, you nailed it!
Thanks,
MGM
Well, I posted with an editing error. In line 15 "glorious beauty" should read "glorious splendor". I don't know how I missed it but I did. I have sent a corrected edited version but I guess it takes a little time for things to get fixed so I am putting this note here. I hate it when I do things like that as I do try to be careful. Oh well, I am human!