- Illustrated Poetry
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- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoNicely open to interpretation whether crying or suffering with wind induced tears. Though here I suspect it's really about crying.
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoRhymefairy, you wrote: “sadness floated up and grabbed my throat” I loved your line (how about a poem on the basis of this line?), but not only could not find it in the poem I could not find the sadness either. I know that the standard interpretation is: Subject tears but denies crying --> Subject is really crying; Subject denies sadness --> Subject is definitely sad. But some times a tear in minus 21 degrees could be just a tear. I found it a real winter poem not overburdened by sentimentalism, but rich wit winter observations. Refreshing and different.
