Selfish

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when the sheen of his skin
shone  like a mirage
above her right knee

and the curtains hung just so,
when the steam of the steeped
tea laughed
 its whistling song
and the pillows were piled
in a row

then the radio was turned
down low
and the ringer was set
to 'no'

and words she never thought
before tumbled down from her
onto his mussed hair.
more, she cried, more, more, more.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Damn wonderful.

Sexy (you know that), clever and well constructed (prolly know that too, or should), funny.

Funny is almost always really sexy, q.v.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Great writing!

I love the sensual, evocative images and the tres sexy ending. I'm really enjoying reading the poems you submit here. I didn't comment on it (boo on me!), but I absolutely loved that jazz/blues piece you wrote a short while back. Keep em coming!

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read. :)

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Nice build up to the release of her words of passion.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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"the ringer was set to no" Good line and good poem.