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Click herewhen the sheen of his skin
shone like a mirage
above her right knee
and the curtains hung just so,
when the steam of the steeped
tea laughed
its whistling song
and the pillows were piled
in a row
then the radio was turned
down low
and the ringer was set
to 'no'
and words she never thought
before tumbled down from her
onto his mussed hair.
more, she cried, more, more, more.
Sexy (you know that), clever and well constructed (prolly know that too, or should), funny.
Funny is almost always really sexy, q.v.
I love the sensual, evocative images and the tres sexy ending. I'm really enjoying reading the poems you submit here. I didn't comment on it (boo on me!), but I absolutely loved that jazz/blues piece you wrote a short while back. Keep em coming!
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read. :)