- Non-Erotic Poetry
- semi-sugar coated
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odd traits and habitual
human-al
self preservation
reserving the right
for more self-degredation
camping out for the best seats
curiousity and compensation
after math of some fantasic feat
i suck at math
and can't define you in those
technical sex terms
that are strung together
by numbers instead of letters
but i got your number
remember
this later in some half hearted
flashback, some love letter
dumbstruck banal mental sitzbath
take this one moment
to bathe, before it fades
in the blinding light of bone-crushing
love i have for you.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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RhymeFairyalmost 18 years agoI love it !! Sexy, hot and very devotional in a poetic kinda way ~ *grins* Love the flow, and the imagery. I feel you here my friend and get it ... I so get it ~
Bravo on the E ...
Great to see you back, missed ya !!!
Maria2394almost 18 years agoI suck
at math, too
love the attitude in this piece :D
congrats on the E, dear birthday buddy o' mine :D
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoThis is a well earned E. Very nice flow and interesting phrasing, creating a intriguing image on a whole.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoWell earned E! I love the last lines -
"....to bathe, before it fades
in the blinding light of bone-crushing
love i have for you. "
Any lover would swoon.
Tess
