Shall I?

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Shall I call you inept baker,
As you twist me like a pretzel, but burn me with your touch?

Shall I call you talented musician,
As you play me like an instrument until I sing my sighs?

Shall I call you brave explorer,
As your lips and fingers delve into my dark corridors and tender hollows?

Shall I call you patient teacher,
As you show me with your moans and whispered shouts, just where you like my tongue to touch?

Shall I can you tireless usurper,
As you determine to take over my will until I answer only to your decadent demands?

Or

Shall I just simply call you my forever love,
As you continue to hold my heart?

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
You teased me!

But the benefits were all mine! Someone who writes poems which sound both modern and classic at the same time and to top it all they can be fun and of course romantic as in here (I came back from reading again the hilarious "flu shmu"...).

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Beautiful!

But do you know what makes it so good? You may wish to Google the term "conceit" as related to poetry. I can't decide whether the comparisons are metaphors, conceits, or similes; but whatever they are, they are elegant. (I would scratch the word "just," since the very next word means essentially the same thing.) Great stuff!

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